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Evil between Friends

I don't usually write poems, but this one was for school, yes I know it doesn't rhyme, it doesn't have to in order to be considered a poem, and it's the first and probably last poem I write.

There is a person I know
Who used to be a friend
She would talk to me like a friend
And we would talk about a lot of stuff

Then came a conflict
Then our friendship was lessened
She would not talk much to me
Only just a simple hello

Every time I tried to talk to her
The problem only got worse
Either I was saying the wrong things
Or I was not listening

In the future, I will try to make friends with her
Because I think we can get along
But right now I should leave her alone
Posted: Jan 29, 2007 11:58:42 pm
hey i didn't know u were actually creative!!!!



"Don't analyze my beliefs, and I won't pick out the flaws in yours."
Posted: Jan 30, 2007 12:02:16 am
hehe im still better than u..just stikc to the computer stuff...hehe..j/k..i like it..but i culd take it and make it better for u if u want
Posted: Jan 30, 2007 4:48:13 pm
If you want to see how better you can make it, go right ahead. I don't do poems very well, stories..yes, poems...no
Posted: Jan 30, 2007 5:47:11 pm
yea ill do it for you..if i ever have time..im so busy ..well when would u like me to put my poems on here
Posted: Jan 30, 2007 6:07:32 pm
You can put your poems on here anytime you like.
Posted: Jan 30, 2007 6:14:17 pm
ok and exactly how do i do that
Posted: Jan 30, 2007 6:37:00 pm
click on "new post" at the top and put in a subject and your message
Posted: Jan 30, 2007 6:47:37 pm
go head homie! you should write more and post them. this really isn't that bad.
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